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The +'s

"P.O.V. shots are very effective"

"Good flow with the music"

"Good effects, sound and acting"

"Good music, continuity, edits and story"

"Really good camera shots and acting"

"Good choice of music, contrast with flash backs and good combination with filming"


The -'s

"The transitions need to be longer, between the flash backs"

"Needs a close up before the second to last flash back of her face"

"Music should stop when she's running away"

"Close up needs to be redone"

"More distressed central character! Smeared mascara etc."

"Needs steadier camera"

"Should have more people at the party"

"Slipping the drug could be better"

"More diagetic sound and suspencse needed"

"Not sure if music with lyrics helps tell the story or is a distraction, makes me think of a music video."